he came towards me. behind the trees, i could see him from the path i make along the dark street lights. i was going home from work. 10.30pm it was exactly. i feel the shiver i always get when i feel something’s wrong. i talk with myself try to calm the me that start losing its logic way of thinking. here he comes, moving up slowly. undernourished ego sliding between the river of my words up inside. he just kept following me since the crossing bridge i always passed every night. as i listen my mp3, i know his presence were there but i just couldn’t see his physical form. as if my shadows were my friend, another part of me talking with me again. i feel secure for a moment there. my fingers makes tapping noise as i try to find something i could do in that dim night. weird and bizzare. a feeling i never felt but it’s good i’m telling you. my eyes so heavy and sleepy even i’m still walking and fighting my fading conciousness. i feel evil. evil to myself and untouchable for those sorround me. i lost myself in a world between that exact minutes. he told me everything i wanted to know all along. a secret that only me should know. i can feel his claw above my left shoulder, whispering to my ear in the hot air right into my ear drum. i smile for a moment. he’s still walking me home, lurking every corner of my sight, i cannot escape. he told me work is endless, a fantasy journey to self development. money isn’t the answer, it’s easy game everyone could play with. but this one is something really big. blending my soul and logic into a comparison with another being. a man holding his ciggarette looking at me. what he saw was a single man, not together. but he also feel his presence, through the cold and heavy atmosphere. he’s flying over to my other shoulder, still smilling with his devilish eyes. his mouth are shut tight, but his words is so strong in my ear. stabbed right into my chest. my fingers are trembling, i never been so scared yet so powerfull as the moment i was enjoying. as if my skilled multiplied, i smiled to him but only my eyes were moving. and told me again, how do i get out of here. out of this numb life path, i know i’m running in circles. this week i see so many people, old, young, lust, love, smart, dumb, rich, poor, they are just the same as others. humans. he told me i’m worthy only to myself. he show me his teeth this time. but his cold fingers strike me on the back of my neck, tenderly, so soft and wise. he never touch the ground we walk upon. i’m almost home. he looked at me straight in my eye, he told me something: "i’ll be right back. i always will." and he’s gone.
23
Aug
06
hi
hello
wow!u impressed me..why dont u try to write a novel?….
u r superb…!!!!!
Sometimes you got to evaluate who you are in order to determine what sort of life you want to live in… Lets share some pointers..
i agree with jendra.
an aspiring novelist.
you make ur stories really intriguing two thumbs up!
yeah..u r the one who can play with words..can create varieties situation with ur words..keep writing..i luv to read it.
good…but pls work on your grammar.
hey!!! uou make stories.. ummmmppp… :o)
hhhmm…
becarefu…
-Jus A KiD
hey dude! u knew ur making up stories.. confabulation in a psyche term.. hehehe.. gudluck!
lalim mo, di ko ma dig dude
grabe…..parang mkatotohanan!! muntk n tuloy me mtakot……
nice one… keep it up…
nice and great!grabe na to”
nice story…gud job pare….
????????? ok kaaaaaaa, may kurot ka sa akin,,,,,
its so eeeeeeeery……………!
that was when the first cold wind of November blew from the west,,,,,i was a li’l nervous that night, walking alone in that long dark street without an indication of life but the moonlght which suggests peace
,,at first i thought it was just only my imagination when iv seen that image but with every step that I’m taking, it ’s getting more and more closer to me and so i cant get t out of my site,,,,
,,a conflict finally triggered inside me till it reached the point that i wanna run as fast as i cud……….and so I did.
,,as im passing that acacia tree with that adrenaline hype, again I saw an image,,,,I stopped…I take a look behind , and the first image had gone completely…..
,,,,then a voice touched my senses,,,,,,within that voice were meanings, but im finding it realy hard to understand……..each thoughts are something that i cant understand, but im sensing a meaning,,,
a meaning of life, the beauty of being blind and what’s real peace……
Truth,,,the truth that im searching,,, and so, I’m the hunted,,,,,,,,,,
I cant look at it the same, within the reality of unnatural laws but no one can have this vision of me,,, and so I ran,,,,,,
The third image finally appeared,,,,,,,,,
Taking a figuration, a metamorphism through that moonlight around me,,,,,,,,
I cant describe the image for it’s not for real,,, and that a memory will not do……..
In spite of the impossibility of that image, finally I’ve seen the meaning,,,,,,,,,
,
The Meaning Of The Third Image
ECKJ07
Within the Sound Of the Violin Is peace everyone is longing
Within the unjustified thoughts lies a key of life-seeing
Reading The Undefined Would be the best thing to do
For there’s no limitation, no pressure for you
I took a deep breath to calm my self and struggle to break the moonbeam thinking that the life of the image comes from it,,,,,,,,,,
It was non sense,,, I wanna get out of that light but I cant,,,,
The one I thought as peace was now haunting me,,,,,,,,,finally iv found my self crying,,,, how can I get out of this LIGHT?? What’s the way to break free??
Those questions are the ones I wanna have first,,,,,,,,,
Without knowing it, I was able to face my ceiling agen,,,,,,,,,with my lamp turned on…..
But with the pain inside my heart!!!!!!
galing mo pre!!!!!!!!!!
kinda weird but intresting! hehe galing!
:p :
hey ur story is fascinating..
and a lil bit spooky..
is dat true?bt sumtime,i’ll believe it.
ha!!!!!!!!
UR STORY GUYS SEEMS THE REFLECTION OF REAL YOU..ITS ADVANTGES CATER MORE READER IN REFLECTION FRONM THE RADERS
no commen
hi..i saluted you as what you are..your great man..hoping that is true of what your saying..guluck
hush!!
hello
what a good job!!! you are so creactive … salutedd
i think it nice………… ;p keep it up!!!!!!!!!!! he6!
you’re terrific!!!
nice story . . ..
hey yeow mwn,,thts was a good,,why dnt u make a novel.
okei lng
kaso prang bitin eh
pro mgnda nman……
c”,)
really?????!!!!!
Are you talkin’ about your boss ?
hi hillo to all of you specially the person who will post thier comment .just start ur day with a smile and joy to achieve ur dream easily
OwWWs….so scary ha!!!hehe
mga fren testy nmn jan
ganda xa!!!!!!
kaw lang gawa nito?
what a nice story…
can i copy that to my blog too???
i’m impressed!!
scary
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ang pangit mo
hi parts muztah naaaaaaaaaaaaa…………
great story.. =)
it happened to me its true
no commen. haha
WAW,RADA g mudeng si tp ok kok…kak be my new friends on friendster y, i have no prend ni masi kosong gt….
nice story.. that was cool!
woahhh
speechless dude!
well.. he is kinda gud pero there are parts where in wrong iyang grammar pero to all-in-all, well dude, you impressed a professional writer! keep it up!
r u sum kinda writer?
but anyway u impressed me!!!
halo
wowwwwww!!ngeniiiig ako doon ah!ang galing ng horror story mo.takkot ako konti lang parang true…….hehehe
am afraid dude he he he
view mine hehehe! im scared
hi just wanna be your friends
Hi hI Hi
ha..ha..hi..hi… dah kayak kuntilanak lw peler!!!!!
nice one,its kinda spooky…
heheh
ghost short yes;roy
oh my BRAVO!!!!!!!! aztig pre ang galing ng pagkakagawa nakaka takut!!!!!!!!!!~~~~~~~~
nicely told… good work…
thats fun!i felt that im in the story…very good…ill try to catch other stories of yours later!i was facinated…goodluck
Im letting myself to be in yourself, im a coward girl in terms of darkness but slight i felt scared..nice story!!good work..
interesting but eerie… i like it! keep up the good work!
i think its kinda….deep but impressing…gudluck…
somethin’ to think deeply what’s next…my pores in cold and my mind’s in boggle..i don’t think if my thoughts are right about who accompanied you…
nc blog…
malufet!!! kakatakot!!!
aHHk!ez,,,,kk xAh,,,
i love poems… i made poems but i dont want to put in blog or put in public,. but u know guys,. a poetry is mystery,and still remain a person who loves to write is called poetry,.they are having secret within them, a secret that never hide, so u better know it,. they are the person who loves to be alone… i am loner person too..love to write poems..
Creepy. Awesome but creepy… nice work…
ah! ok?! ok lang, nkakatuwa! waaaaaaaaahahahaha… korni
fuck u k
i support u man.
nice photo
WAH U IMPRESSD ME!!!!! SPOOOOOOKYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!
wooohhh ebrybodi…. im alone in da dark ma
yuhuuu….hi friends….im alone now….
Hi there dude u know i like ur story. but its better that u use some easy words. para nmn ma gets nmin ng husto……but u know i’de like to experince that scaring momments….can u help me….im not kidding u know..
yo…great story dude!!!
and then …. what?
can u be my frnd?be good…i am a gud frnd!!!!!!!!!!!!!
?
kala ko nmn kung anu na!!
dre aus ka……
aylabyu na!wahhaha!!!!!!!
u’r a sort of having split personality pare.. joke!
hey i like it
a very deep meaning. I’m impressed. Keep writing and you’ll succeed 1 day as a novelist
You write good (with few grammatical errors which are fine since those could be corrected).
But there’s more to your writing than meets the eye. I can make out, or, to put it safely, you either want to be a writer someday or you are a person who is unhappy inside and use writing as a creative outlet. I bet you are an artist, a budding poet or someone creative.
Looking for the meaning of life, hints of sadness and talks of the devil are the ingredients that sum up an unhappy state.
If you think what I’m saying here is right, let me know.
If I’m wrong and you just want to be writer and unhappiness has nothing to do with your writing style, just ignore this then
Nice!!
hey are you feeling that too,i feel it too like something is whispering into your head then i can move thing by my mind!!
wowaweeeeeeee pwede na, just
more practice dude…………..
allo…
Hey dude
Nice work you got there. But I have to admit, you’ve got to improve on the grammar and spelling.
Anyroad, keep writing. The story’s good.
r u reaLLy d 1 who did dis kind of storY???s ur hobbY to wroTe a stoRy?????4 me 8z was 1 of d ncE storY,,dat i had been read…cn u send me mor story at my emaiL add., irishKristine_08@yahoo.com or bettr tx me at 09207213909..iL rather w8 it..tnx…
i agree with mystery. improve the grammar thing and ur on ur way up! hu knows, i might hav ur books on my shelves one of these days….
shalom aliechem!
convince me!!!!!!!!!! quite impressive.
see my publisher…………
Its quite impressive…
but its really wierd…
Sound’s scary…Dude!
yes
do take care….halooo!
weird…………
your such a good writer man!!! i hope we could be friend!! coz youre inspiring me alot. good lock and keep writing for good,..=)
grabe very scare ako!convine lahat ng gnwa mo
good story pare!!!!!!!!
looking forward for another story!!!!!!! heheheheh!!!
just add me heheheheh!!!!!!!!
wow!!!im realy amaze wid u!!!!!!!!!hwew!!!!!!
ang galing mo ‘tol…hehehe
i’m scared of dat kinda feeling…..
Ei….TAHUM!! nice interpetation of yourself… TRY to find the REAL YOU Okie??? God bless u…:)
are you a writer or just it came from your true experience? im amaze!
well i only like to say ……….that’s great idea
HUh!!!! What’s that???? Hehehe……
ay ewan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
grabe!!!!!!!!!!!ano ba yun ang pangit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ang pangit mo!!!!!! sinasapian!!!!!! hahahahahahahahahahahah!!!!!!
Grammar glitches aside, I think it was a pretty ‘cool’ post.
ummm wow…ur sort of inspiring and the thing is i dont know ,…u…weirdly crazy
huh. hmmmm…
u reminds me of the japanese kid who poisons his classmates.
truly…too little knowhow is dangerous…bettertryagain..
…..nothing to ask more..
hehehe………. la lng galing!!
hello brain….
i’m rRey..
your mask is very good..
Great and magnificent.
fantastic story
oh! my god that was so scary story it is amazing to read your story
wierd and creepy…devilish
that was awesome..!! its really scarry yet realistic one.., i rememberd when i saw a movie FENG SUI…
GREAT!!!!
charoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooootttttttttttttttttttttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
oh my god!!
u`re really great man!!
really scarrrrryyyy!!!!!!
and i love it!!!!
yeah!!!!!!!!grabe kktakot d me 2loy mk2log sa gbi pero ok lng ang pogi mo nmn sa pic.add mo ko this is my emailadd add mo ko shekhina_mae@yahoo.com.ph
well………….
8s scary………….
i luv it………….
ahehe………
cn u b my friend?
gago ka delete koang frienster
yaiks!
I think that was me
no comment
bragged
bay! ongo….
hi!po gud am po,thanks for info.send po uli kau.
Ur stories haunt me. It’s everybody’s reflection. As if we see our scary faces in front of the mirror; a face we’d always resist to gaze at… Hope ur feelin better now…
Grabe!!!!…..speechless ako nung mabasa ko yung story mo….ikaw ba talaga ang sumulat nito????write more coz i know you’ll make it….
i think your a good writer………………. from shemy scarborough,ontario,canada
ere
add me arielhots@yahoo.com
ohhhhlalaaaaaa
i think its good…
i think a new J.K. rowling is born…
w…o….o…w
dark and disturbingly beautiful….seems that you dealing with your own devil. nway, hello! just stopping by here! i like this piece of yours. why don’t you wirte the whole story together? i’m sure it’ll be interesting.